I like your presentation but you must get used to using examples when emaking a point or expressing an opinion. You can either explain for example why you think a specific aspect of the media (i.e. video games) are problematic! You also contradict yourself when discussing aspects of the music industry. You need to start embedding images and video footage in order to reflect confidence with using new technologies. There are also issues about illegal downloading, for example one could suggest this is a form of theft!!
I like your presentation but you must get used to using examples when emaking a point or expressing an opinion. You can either explain for example why you think a specific aspect of the media (i.e. video games) are problematic! You also contradict yourself when discussing aspects of the music industry. You need to start embedding images and video footage in order to reflect confidence with using new technologies. There are also issues about illegal downloading, for example one could suggest this is a form of theft!!
ReplyDeleteYou need to post your photographs using a variety of different camera angles. This was due at the beginning of the week.
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