A mainly proficient response covering appropriate outlets for distribution.
To strengthen:
1) Paragraphing the section on Exhibition. Could you sort this out.
2) I think.....avoid saying this.
3) Note Warp promotes undiscovered talent, you could say that like "This is England" your film "Of the Night" also has undiscovered actors in the cast. This adds authenticity to mise-en-scene and strengthens appeal.
A mainly proficient response covering appropriate outlets for distribution.
ReplyDeleteTo strengthen:
1) Paragraphing the section on Exhibition. Could you sort this out.
2) I think.....avoid saying this.
3) Note Warp promotes undiscovered talent, you could say that like "This is England" your film "Of the Night" also has undiscovered actors in the cast. This adds authenticity to mise-en-scene and strengthens appeal.